This looks like a lovely top. I created mine , not so great.
In the pattern you add this flounce on the sleeves so it is difficult to take in once they are on. I also had a bit of trouble adding the flounce on the sleeve.
I like the pom poms on the bottom though. Admittedly the pattern is designed for a woven fabric and I used a knit so maybe that was a contributing factor.
This top will probably never be worn but I hung it up and we'll see. I was a bit disappointed not to have a new white top. Oh well.